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Friday 05/23/2008 1:54:12pm
Name: Samantha
E-mail:
Where are you from? SD
Comments: I absolutely love this story and I must respectfully disagree with Mary on two points. Point #1: Because "Loch Lomond" is essentially a sequal to "The Highland Fling Murders," I do not believe that the B plot (Jessica and George's relationship) overshadowed the mystery. After all, "The Highland Fling Murders" certainly made their relationship a primary focus of the original story. Point #2 I don't know how anyone could misinterpret Jessica and George literally and innocently sleeping together in front of the fireplace as the two of them having sex. I think that the author likely went to a great deal of work to make it clear that there was no sex. In my opinion, if George had not stayed with her in front of the fire, to comfort and to protect her, I would think a great deal less of his character. I think that the author did a fabulous job of showing how much of a gentleman George really is, and just how much he respects Jessica. He set aside his own desires in order to keep her safe and warm and while comforting and soothing her. What more could you ask? This story and this scene in particular were PERFECT!
Story rating: Excellent



Tuesday 05/13/2008 7:18:35pm
Name: Mary
E-mail: m.manaugh@yahoo.com
Where are you from? Seymour,In.
Comments: I can't belive I'm saying this because I love seeing George and Jessica together but, there was so much written about them and their relationship that it kind of overshadowed the murder mystery investgation. Other than that, it was a really cute story. Just leave out the part were most people would think they slept together in front of the fire next time.
Story rating: Good



Monday 03/06/2006 11:28:27pm
Name: Sheridan Marie Stephens
E-mail: Sheridanstephens@yahoo.com
Where are you from? Marina, Monterey County, CA USA
Comments: Great story and the love scenes....Oh my God!!!!! They were very nicely done. I wonder what Angela would have to say about it and the story, hummmm?
Story rating: Excellent



Thursday 11/10/2005 11:50:37pm
Name: Stephanie
E-mail:
Where are you from? MO
Comments: Grabs you immediately - you won't be able to put it down. Wonderful, fabulous and even a tad racy;) I absolutely loved it. Can't wait to see what happens to these two next.
Story rating: Excellent

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