Search:
Tripod
Web by
Guest Gear
Laura Hird
Sign this Guestbook
|
Manage your Guestbook
Page 1 of 44
Go To Page:
Tuesday 08/19/2008 12:41:12am
Name:
Nessie Richardson
e-mail:
http://nessr21@hotmail.co.uk
city/country:
england
website:
Comments:
keep up the good work
Sunday 08/03/2008 9:24:29pm
Name:
Justin Fenech
e-mail:
http://justin3@di-ve.com
city/country:
Hamrun/ Malta
website:
http://propheciesofthemediterrenean.blogspot.com/
Comments:
Hi Ms.Azzopardi,
I have recently come across your website via Malta Poetry.And I have to
say it's quite wicked, it quickly found it's way on to my favourites
list.Which is no surprise really for as I always believe, any fan of The
Smiths must have good taste.And that certainly has been the case here.
Music aside for the moment, I'm actually contacting you as a fellow
poet.First of all I've read your poem on Malta Poetry and I was more than
a little intrigued.Your style is very similar to mine (do we have the same
influences perhaps?) and also the words are...well Mediterrenean; they
flow with a tranquil vigour and hunger.
I would also like to enquire wether it would be possible for some of my
poems to appear on a magazine publication, as your wondrous works already
have? If so I'd be most appreciative to know what procedures must be taken
and such.
I've also taken the liberty of enclosing a poem of mine in this
email.Shameful I know, but we Maltese do have a habit of inviting
ourselves, and I am too miniscule to resist my roots.
Do not frown too much when reading these lines, I would be delighted if
you could find a mere word of praise for it - Oh mad ambition!
Anyway here goes...
A Promise
From a bouquet
Of churches
Sun-lit, love's destiny,
I pick an insatiable
Steeple,
Maddened with rigour,
High, proud, like an ancient olive tree.
I pick it
And place it,
Firmly
Around the bench of the young friends.
Astronomers of passionate stars!
The square echoes with their voices -
Pastizzerias
Sell their soul
To their games.
They clothe
The naked nights
With veils of acid
Foaming
With spittle, entwined
Into borderlines
Of lips
And words.
From amongst them
I pick out a promise,
One as small as:
"I'll see you tomorrow",
So as to be understood
And broken without tears.
I will take it with me
To visit the lovers
By the red seaside.
Cutting the waves
With their double steps
They leave
A well of golden archways:
There I shall place
The minute promise.
Flowing upon the flushing waves,
It will find them
When they are
Four seconds ahead of joy
Four seconds behind alarm.
The little child
With the dome of his belly,
Tempting the pigeons to nest,
Skin as dark as night,
Making kingdoms out of sand
On the same seaside,
Shall deliver to me
The news
Of the fulfillment
Or death
Of the small promise
Between the two lovers.
Thank you for taking the time for listening to my rambling,
Justin Fenech, 19, Hamrun.
Wednesday 03/26/2008 1:53:19pm
Name:
gayathree achu
e-mail:
http://gayathree.achu@gmail.com
city/country:
Doha, Qatar
website:
Comments:
Hello Laura,
I was looking for an old College Friend of mine, googled him and found him featured on your site. If you keep regular contact with him, could you please send me his email or contact information. Or if you'd prefer, please pass my on email address to him. We studied together at SIUC and I'd been thinking about him recently and just wanted to see what he's been up to.
Thank you
Gayathree Achu
Sunday 01/06/2008 3:44:38am
Name:
e-mail:
city/country:
website:
Comments:
Sunday 01/06/2008 3:40:32am
Name:
lol
e-mail:
city/country:
website:
Comments:
Sign this Guestbook
|
Manage your Guestbook
Page 1 of 44
Go To Page: